Monday, March 14, 2011

SOLSC: Captured - 14/31

The Slice of Life Story Challenge 
is hosted by the Two Writing Teachers.

Captured

A slice
     a memory
          a recollection
A story
     a snapshot
          a remembrance
            
A moment in time.  All patiently waiting.
Waiting to be captured.  Captured with words --
Precise, perfect, picture-painting words.


7 comments:

  1. I really liked the use of alliteration. Can I share with my class so they can hear it?

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  2. I think your words said it all - precise, perfect, picture-painting words. Very nice!

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  3. Oooh, love the alliteration. I like the way you have the lines like staggered too.

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  4. BEAUTIFUL! I love this especially your last line. I have been trying to get my students to slice with precision and about one aspect of their life. Thanks for sharing!

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  5. I loved how you continued to refine and add more depth to the definition.

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts.