Monday, March 25, 2013

solsc: together 25/31


March Slice of Life Story Challenge 
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FAMILY


All together     My girls     Mom and Dad     Brother and soon-sister


Relaxing together     Laughing together     Talking together     Being together


I sigh in relief     sharing the joy of     my girls and      all their enthusiasm


Playing together     Reading together     Pretending together     Being silly together


Brother and soon-sister     Mom and Dad     My girls     Together again     


FAMILY




13 comments:

  1. You've captured it all! Family is so important. So glad we are together. Love ya M

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  2. So glad you are all together, enjoying each other. Have fun!

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  3. I know exactly what you mean....it's what life is all about! Enjoy....Enjoy!

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  4. A great poem to encompass the joy in your heart!

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  5. Michelle,
    Have a wonderful time with your family. How nice to be all together! I'm on spring break this week and my mom is really trying to get me to drive down. I'm debating. It's such a long drive by myself (11 hours), but I would get to see my daughter too which is definitely a bonus. I have so much to do here, but your poem makes me think I should get in the car.

    Thoughtful structure for your poem. The phrases grouped together to create lines of similar ideas is interesting to me.

    Have fun!
    Cathy

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    1. You can never get back family time, Cathy. I say hop in the car with a couple audio books and you'll be good to go! All that other "stuff," can wait.

      Thanks for noticing the format - nothing special, I just wanted it to "look" different than a poem going down.

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  6. Enjoy this family time. Sounds wonderful!

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  7. I can feel your joy. I am happy for you all. Savor the time together. You are experimenting again. Interesting format that you used.

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    1. You are right! I wanted something different -- pleasing to my eye.

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  8. I love the way this looks on the page...and the joy of family time it captures. Enjoy!

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  9. I am glad you are all getting to spend time together. The beginning and the end are the same...family together. There's nothing better!

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  10. Really sounds great and looks great, Michelle-happy family time!

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts.