March Slice of Life Story Challenge
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FAMILY
All together My girls Mom and Dad Brother and soon-sister
Relaxing together Laughing together Talking together Being together
I sigh in relief sharing the joy of my girls and all their enthusiasm
Playing together Reading together Pretending together Being silly together
Brother and soon-sister Mom and Dad My girls Together again
FAMILY
Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteYou've captured it all! Family is so important. So glad we are together. Love ya M
ReplyDeleteSo glad you are all together, enjoying each other. Have fun!
ReplyDeleteI know exactly what you mean....it's what life is all about! Enjoy....Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteA great poem to encompass the joy in your heart!
ReplyDeleteMichelle,
ReplyDeleteHave a wonderful time with your family. How nice to be all together! I'm on spring break this week and my mom is really trying to get me to drive down. I'm debating. It's such a long drive by myself (11 hours), but I would get to see my daughter too which is definitely a bonus. I have so much to do here, but your poem makes me think I should get in the car.
Thoughtful structure for your poem. The phrases grouped together to create lines of similar ideas is interesting to me.
Have fun!
Cathy
You can never get back family time, Cathy. I say hop in the car with a couple audio books and you'll be good to go! All that other "stuff," can wait.
DeleteThanks for noticing the format - nothing special, I just wanted it to "look" different than a poem going down.
Enjoy this family time. Sounds wonderful!
ReplyDeleteI can feel your joy. I am happy for you all. Savor the time together. You are experimenting again. Interesting format that you used.
ReplyDeleteYou are right! I wanted something different -- pleasing to my eye.
DeleteI love the way this looks on the page...and the joy of family time it captures. Enjoy!
ReplyDeleteI am glad you are all getting to spend time together. The beginning and the end are the same...family together. There's nothing better!
ReplyDeleteReally sounds great and looks great, Michelle-happy family time!
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