March Slice of Life Story Challenge
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on the sofa
snuggled under a blanket
next to each other
watching a Netflix DVD that
has been sitting around for
at least three months
not preoccupied with
facebook
twitter
solsc
pinterest
videos
music
books
journals
words with friends
or anything else --
just enjoying a movie
and the eyelids are heavy
at the end of the day
both asleep within an hour
next to each other
snuggled under a blanket
on the sofa
It makes me sleepy just reading this! It is good to unplug sometimes.
ReplyDeleteLove this - have been there myself many a time. Glad you had a good night.
ReplyDeleteThere are times when you just need to unplug, relax and enjoy! We get so wrapped up in all those extracurricular activities and forgot to take time to do just nothing. Love ya M
ReplyDeleteGlad to hear your hubby isn't feeling neglected this March :) Sometimes physical peace and emotional peace can't help but merge. I love how the repetition acts like bookends here (how you flipped the lines to go out as you came in).
ReplyDeleteGoes to show you how sometimes we just need to sit, relax and unwind...which usually means heavy eyelids... but sometimes that's ok!
ReplyDeleteSounds like a just right Saturday night to me, of course, my eyelids are always heavy. Love the shape of your poem. :)
ReplyDeletePerfect! Glad you were able to enjoy catch and enjoy the moments.
ReplyDeletesounds good. I think I'd better shut off my computer :)
ReplyDeleteTime for you and him, that's perfect!
ReplyDeleteThose moments are to be cherished, for sure!
ReplyDeleteThat is exactly the kind of "date" my hubby and I need. It is so true--we are usually both on opposite couches with the remote in one hand and a phone,laptop or computer mouse in the other with our eyes fixed on the TV. Snuggled together on the couch under a blanket sounds so much better. One question, Michelle- Where were the twins? Let's hope fast asleep!
ReplyDeleteWarm, toasty movie night with the hubby. It's the best!
ReplyDeleteGlad you had a fun (albeit sleepy) night together without distractions. And I love how you flipped the three lines at the beginning and the end.
ReplyDeleteYour beginning and ending bookend the piece delightfully. Snuggled - wonderful.
ReplyDeleteJust a perfect date night, you two together!
ReplyDeletePerfect. Both the date night and the writing.
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