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A Student's Slice

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A Student's Slice

I had to share this third grade student's slice. . . it is worth the chuckle.


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  1. LetterpressMarch 4, 2011 at 12:05 PM

    Such a universal emotion! I know I felt left behind a few times in my young life when my parents traveled. But--true confession--I never thought about how my children felt when I left on trips. I just figured they'd have their turn when they were older. And they have--and left their children with me!

    Elizabeth E.
    http://peninkpaper.blogspot.com

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  2. Christy Rush-LevineMarch 4, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    That is some sophisticated formatting for a 3rd grader! I love it! The way it looks really drives home the most important part.

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  3. elsieMarch 4, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    What voice your young writer has, very funny and clever too. Thanks for sharing!

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  4. AmandaMarch 4, 2011 at 9:28 PM

    I love the formatting and voice too! I'm guessing this little writer tends to deliver some stellar one-liners! :)

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