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SOLSC: Captured - 14/31

The Slice of Life Story Challenge 
is hosted by the Two Writing Teachers.

Captured

A slice
     a memory
          a recollection
A story
     a snapshot
          a remembrance
            
A moment in time.  All patiently waiting.
Waiting to be captured.  Captured with words --
Precise, perfect, picture-painting words.


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  1. Terje March 14, 2011 at 11:32 AM

    Beautiful.

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  2. LynnelleMarch 14, 2011 at 12:51 PM

    What a powerful description.

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  3. CathyMarch 14, 2011 at 7:33 PM

    I really liked the use of alliteration. Can I share with my class so they can hear it?

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  4. elsieMarch 14, 2011 at 7:39 PM

    I think your words said it all - precise, perfect, picture-painting words. Very nice!

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  5. Diana MartinMarch 14, 2011 at 8:20 PM

    Oooh, love the alliteration. I like the way you have the lines like staggered too.

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  6. AnonymousMarch 14, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    BEAUTIFUL! I love this especially your last line. I have been trying to get my students to slice with precision and about one aspect of their life. Thanks for sharing!

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  7. Amanda VillagómezMarch 14, 2011 at 10:32 PM

    I loved how you continued to refine and add more depth to the definition.

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