tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post3627790893895441631..comments2023-12-28T16:31:10.689-06:00Comments on Literacy Learning Zone: SOLSC: My Roller Coaster of a Weekend - 15/31Michellehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04822472844833732246noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-50608107370859450152011-03-15T23:50:11.737-05:002011-03-15T23:50:11.737-05:00So sorry for your loss. Hope the celebration of lo...So sorry for your loss. Hope the celebration of love helps balance the loss. Beautiful poem and another form of memoir to add to this special text type.Blinkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05209361947351963691noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-46268344907673573972011-03-15T20:23:59.222-05:002011-03-15T20:23:59.222-05:00How clever to combine a series of 6 word memoirs t...How clever to combine a series of 6 word memoirs to tell the entire story. Wow. My fingers are itching to try this.<br />Thanks for sharing,<br />RuthAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-49075523165119475132011-03-15T19:59:21.896-05:002011-03-15T19:59:21.896-05:00Your poem swings my emotions one way and then the ...Your poem swings my emotions one way and then the other. Dynamic. I strive to use fewer words, and you captured it so beautifully. :)MaryHelenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-16224929785339115982011-03-15T16:54:52.984-05:002011-03-15T16:54:52.984-05:00I love the way you connected the six-word lines to...I love the way you connected the six-word lines together into one poem. Very effective.Diana Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09983334708228942464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-75417975904379839742011-03-15T15:03:34.121-05:002011-03-15T15:03:34.121-05:00I'm just finishing a unit in non-fiction writi...I'm just finishing a unit in non-fiction writing & we included memoir in that. I will show your six-word piece to the students. It would be fun to conclude with a real conservation of words. Nice that you connected both life events, & wrote with them compared.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-77933505160311653102011-03-15T14:17:40.423-05:002011-03-15T14:17:40.423-05:00I like how you were able to make connections, usin...I like how you were able to make connections, using few words, between two very different events.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-220390520594776250.post-62759198775349367892011-03-15T07:35:45.712-05:002011-03-15T07:35:45.712-05:00So few words but such powerful feelings. I really ...So few words but such powerful feelings. I really like how you were able to get joy and sadness conveyed in each line. Nice!elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.com